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    i love her

    i stare in the mirror
    glaring back at myself
    im tired bored lonely scared
    and i have nothing better to do

    im hungry thirsty dirty
    im considering leaving my room
    leaving;going to drift away
    into my endless sea of sorrow

    i lay down; i cant leave
    my minds running;racing
    she took over my brain but
    i really dont want it back

    she can keep it i dont mind
    i love her and shes my one and only
    i could get lost in her eyes
    and i can drool over her lips(lol)

    her body is mezmorizing
    our alikeness is amazing
    our conversations are awesome
    i love her

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    Re: i love her

    Awww that is soo sweet.
    I love it. So much emotion.

    And its written very well.

    I love it.
    Of course all your poems are good.lol.

    Good work! Keep it up and hope to see more.

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    Re: i love her

    thank you so much ive only written a few poems like this but i didnt feal satifaied with it but thanks anyway

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    Re: i love her

    awwww this poem is so romantic!! You're very good at poem writing. This had good describing I loved it good job hope to see more~!^^



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    good job on the poem I like it alot. keep it up. I hope to see more from you.
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    Re: i love her

    thank you everyone im glad you liked it check more at www.freewebs.com/onlinebookofpoems/ its a site i made

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    Re: i love her

    very good emotions i love all your poems
    cant wait for more keep it ↑ ♥~*The Princess*~♥
    Yeah, Bye.

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    man..... thanks everyone im so glad you guys like it

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