Awww that is soo sweet.
I love it. So much emotion.
And its written very well.
I love it.
Of course all your poems are good.lol.
Good work! Keep it up and hope to see more.
i stare in the mirror
glaring back at myself
im tired bored lonely scared
and i have nothing better to do
im hungry thirsty dirty
im considering leaving my room
leaving;going to drift away
into my endless sea of sorrow
i lay down; i cant leave
my minds running;racing
she took over my brain but
i really dont want it back
she can keep it i dont mind
i love her and shes my one and only
i could get lost in her eyes
and i can drool over her lips(lol)
her body is mezmorizing
our alikeness is amazing
our conversations are awesome
i love her
thank you so much ive only written a few poems like this but i didnt feal satifaied with it but thanks anyway
good job on the poem I like it alot. keep it up. I hope to see more from you.
Keep what you hold dear close for one day they may be gone forever!
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thank you everyone im glad you liked it check more at www.freewebs.com/onlinebookofpoems/ its a site i made
very good emotions i love all your poems
cant wait for more keep it ↑ ♥~*The Princess*~♥
man..... thanks everyone im so glad you guys like it