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  1. Jul 29, 2006 03:10 PM #1
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    I love you

    There's not enough time in this life
    For me to show you how much
    I love you

    There's not enough stars in the sky
    To shine for how bright
    I love you

    There's not enough smiles on my lips
    To show you I'm happy because
    I love you

    There's not enough poems I'd write
    That could ever express how truly
    I love you

    There is no kiss deep enough
    To make you feel how strongly
    I love you

    There will be no hug long enough
    To embrace you with how warmly
    I love you

    There is not enough money
    For me to buy you all the ways
    I love you

    There are not enough days
    For me to be with you and show you
    I love you

    There are too many miles between us
    For me to be there and proove
    I love you

    There are too many parents who try
    To talk me out of the fact that
    I love you

    There are too many things that threaten
    To hurt the fact that I know
    I love you

    But no matter how many tears fall
    I peer at your smile and whisper
    I love you

    So at the very end of our happy days
    My last words, I know will be...
    I love you.

    ~Julia (Red Rose)
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  2. Jul 29, 2006 04:05 PM #2
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    Re: I love you

    So at the very end of our happy days
    My last words, I know will be...
    I love you
    I like this stanza the most, it was a nice poem overall i will give you 10 out of 10, keep it up.
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    Re: I love you

    Thank you much! That was my favorite too.
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    Re: I love you

    very nice......i really enjoyed reading it. keep it up!
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    Re: I love you

    i love that last stanza too! a great way to end this lovely poem... ^^ keep it up! i hope to see more of your works... 10/10

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  6. Jul 29, 2006 08:16 PM #6
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    Re: I love you

    Very nice poem, I enjoyed it, you keep it up, okay Red rose?
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