Capitalization, spelling and punctuation. Goodness, this poem is unreadable.
theres somthing whant to know
no matter what happens
i promise with all my heart
i'll allways be there for you
when things get tough
and start to feel alone
i promise
i will allways be by your side
justed as i know youll be by mine
i whant you to know
your everything i have ever whanted
you always mack me smile
never forget
i love you![]()
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When you walk away
You don't hear me say please. Oh baby, don't go
Simple and clean is the way that you're making me feel tonight. It's hard to let it go
Capitalization, spelling and punctuation. Goodness, this poem is unreadable.
Seduced by Flesh
unread able my ars come on Kasaithe English lang.. is easy to read scrambled as long as the first2 and last 1 letter are in the right place
the human brain will automaticly put the rest in the proper spots.
Any way I kined the poem!![]()
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thanxs . and really how is this unreadable. i mean i am only human . i mack mistacks. and yes still i know i cant spell.
When you walk away
You don't hear me say please. Oh baby, don't go
Simple and clean is the way that you're making me feel tonight. It's hard to let it go
you know that you can edit and fix them if you misspell right? anyway the poem is really good it's cute. but really you should click on the edit button and fix them.
Aww, I wonder who's this based on? ^_^ Let's hope to see more comming. It's cute, and sweet... but a few mistakes.
O.<
oiy..spelling....
But other than that, lovely poem, Inuyashagirl! Keep it up![ ~__~ and work on spelling && grammar
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