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    Smile I Love You!!!!!!!

    theres somthing whant to know

    no matter what happens

    i promise with all my heart

    i'll allways be there for you

    when things get tough

    and start to feel alone

    i promise

    i will allways be by your side

    justed as i know youll be by mine

    i whant you to know

    your everything i have ever whanted

    you always mack me smile

    never forget

    i love you
    When you walk away
    You don't hear me say please. Oh baby, don't go
    Simple and clean is the way that you're making me feel tonight. It's hard to let it go

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    Re: I Love You!!!!!!!

    Capitalization, spelling and punctuation. Goodness, this poem is unreadable.
    Seduced by Flesh


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    Re: I Love You!!!!!!!

    unread able my ars come on Kasai the English lang.. is easy to read scrambled as long as the first2 and last 1 letter are in the right place
    the human brain will automaticly put the rest in the proper spots.
    Any way I kined the poem!

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    Re: I Love You!!!!!!!

    thanxs . and really how is this unreadable. i mean i am only human . i mack mistacks. and yes still i know i cant spell.
    When you walk away
    You don't hear me say please. Oh baby, don't go
    Simple and clean is the way that you're making me feel tonight. It's hard to let it go

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    Re: I Love You!!!!!!!

    you know that you can edit and fix them if you misspell right? anyway the poem is really good it's cute. but really you should click on the edit button and fix them.
    every rose has a thorn

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    Re: I Love You!!!!!!!

    Aww, I wonder who's this based on? ^_^ Let's hope to see more comming. It's cute, and sweet... but a few mistakes.

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    Re: I Love You!!!!!!!

    O.<

    oiy..spelling....

    But other than that, lovely poem, Inuyashagirl! Keep it up! [ ~__~ and work on spelling && grammar ]

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    Re: I Love You!!!!!!!

    Quote Originally Posted by inuyashagurl View Post
    theres somthing whant to know

    no matter what happens

    i promise with all my heart

    i'll allways be there for you

    when things get tough

    and start to feel alone

    i promise

    i will allways be by your side

    justed as i know youll be by mine

    i whant you to know

    your everything i have ever whanted

    you always mack me smile

    never forget

    i love you
    It's still a lovely a poem. Don't care about spelling as long as I can read it.
    Your life means nothing to me.

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