I love you

xxoxx · May 09, 2007, 01:49 AM

I love you
I love you
As I have never loved
you are the one
My greatest love

I love you
I love you
With your beautiful eyes
your golden smile
and beautiful sighs

I love you
I love you
since we first met
you are my
heart and my soul

I hope you love it ..

CherryBlossom18 · May 09, 2007, 02:12 AM

Sweet poem that's exactly how I feel about my boyfriend. I can't wait to read more.

xxoxx · May 09, 2007, 02:23 AM

thank you very much for you sweet comment ...this my first one and it's very short but you love it ...that 's make me very happy ..
thank you ....

*equinn* · May 09, 2007, 03:03 AM

awww thats sooo sweet i could be put in a card ^__^ it shows u love him

i bet he will be spechless after this

*Lasura* · May 09, 2007, 06:48 AM

A nice poem indeed... It's really sweet and cheerful, could make me smile any time! Good work xxoxx, but I'll be waiting for more and for better!!!!

bcvl1124 · May 09, 2007, 10:13 PM

I really love poems and making them! Uhm... here's one.

I just love the way you look at my eyes
I just love the way you kiss my lips
I just love the way you hold my hands and never letting go.

You are my one and truly lover
You are the one who belongs in my heart
You are the person who is perfect for me.

All I wanna say is I love you.

xxoxx · May 10, 2007, 06:41 AM

thank you bcvl1124 ...that's nice poem you put it ..
hope you see more from you ...

fluff n pink · May 10, 2007, 07:37 AM

nice poem!! good thinking u must of really took time and thought about it!!

!The White Wolf · May 10, 2007, 04:52 PM

Your poem had a very nice flow to it up until the last two lines.

What happened? You got tired of rhyming or something?

Great poem even so. Keep up the good work so you may further improve your writing skills.

Little negi sensei · May 10, 2007, 05:14 PM

nice pome i really like it. this probably isn't anywere near as good but hear it goes

I love you i'm not sure why maby your laugh or your eyes.
could it be the way you look at me or your beautiful smile
i'll do anything it takes to be with you. give my soul or my
life.
ah-ha i tould you it would suck

xxoxx · May 11, 2007, 08:02 AM

thank you very much for
Little negi sensei,fluff n pink,The White Wolf,Little negi sensei that make happy that you love my first poem ...

May 09, 2007, 01:49 AM	#1 (permalink)
xxoxx Otaku Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: 無くなった Posts: 354 Thanks: 3 Thanked 3 Times in 3 Posts Credits: 3,573	I love you I love you I love you As I have never loved you are the one My greatest love I love you I love you With your beautiful eyes your golden smile and beautiful sighs I love you I love you since we first met you are my heart and my soul I hope you love it .. __________________ Just Try It
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CherryBlossom18 Heavy Metal Goddess Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: a place where the stars shine as bright as the sun Posts: 578 Thanks: 1 Thanked 16 Times in 16 Posts Credits: 2,326	Re: I love you Sweet poem that's exactly how I feel about my boyfriend. I can't wait to read more. __________________ "Sunset Kisses Along The Beach" Made for me by HolderofTheDarkChalice Thanks so much I love it!
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xxoxx Otaku Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: 無くなった Posts: 354 Thanks: 3 Thanked 3 Times in 3 Posts Credits: 3,573	Re: I love you thank you very much for you sweet comment ...this my first one and it's very short but you love it ...that 's make me very happy .. thank you .... __________________ Just Try It
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Lasura Angelic Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: In a Demon's Arms Posts: 1,866 Thanks: 56 Thanked 32 Times in 30 Posts Credits: 49,182	Re: I love you A nice poem indeed... It's really sweet and cheerful, could make me smile any time! Good work xxoxx, but I'll be waiting for more and for better!!!! __________________ My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge
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bcvl1124 Diamond in the Rough Join Date: May 2007 Location: uranuskthnx Posts: 128 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 3,023	Re: I love you I really love poems and making them! Uhm... here's one. I just love the way you look at my eyes I just love the way you kiss my lips I just love the way you hold my hands and never letting go. You are my one and truly lover You are the one who belongs in my heart You are the person who is perfect for me. All I wanna say is I love you.
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xxoxx Otaku Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: 無くなった Posts: 354 Thanks: 3 Thanked 3 Times in 3 Posts Credits: 3,573	Re: I love you thank you bcvl1124 ...that's nice poem you put it .. hope you see more from you ... __________________ Just Try It Last edited by xxoxx; May 12, 2007 at 07:58 PM.
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!The White Wolf Why so serious? Join Date: Feb 2007 Posts: 2,580 Thanks: 9 Thanked 12 Times in 11 Posts Credits: 10,073	Re: I love you Your poem had a very nice flow to it up until the last two lines. What happened? You got tired of rhyming or something? Great poem even so. Keep up the good work so you may further improve your writing skills.
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Little negi sensei Diamond in the Rough Join Date: May 2007 Posts: 359 Thanks: 13 Thanked 3 Times in 3 Posts Credits: 1,076	Re: I love you nice pome i really like it. this probably isn't anywere near as good but hear it goes I love you i'm not sure why maby your laugh or your eyes. could it be the way you look at me or your beautiful smile i'll do anything it takes to be with you. give my soul or my life. ah-ha i tould you it would suck
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