i love you

!levitatinganimelover · Jun 19, 2007, 08:06 AM

i love you
yes its true
i tried to tell you
through many of clue

i tried not to mess with
your current relaitionship
while still trying to exceed
our current friendship

you are the only thing i
can think about sometimes
in my thoughts,my dreams,
and even my rhymes

i want you close,
i want you near,
in my arms,
i want you here

!Mini Dev · Jun 19, 2007, 08:09 AM

thats happened to me once but that was just a superb poem i hope you write more and stay on this subject or on these lines it's very good thanks for the poem

*Lasura* · Jun 19, 2007, 08:11 AM

A great love poem, you've done a great work with this one... I like it very much... the love in this one seems so strong... beautifull!!!! ^^

The last stranza is just wonderful!!! adorable!!! great work!!!

KuwiRules145 · Jun 19, 2007, 08:15 AM

Awwww...this is a cute poem! That once happen to me when I was little so yeah! I just think it's romantic to read! I hope to see more!

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!levitatinganimelover Banned Join Date: Apr 2007 Posts: 165 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: -20	i love you i love you yes its true i tried to tell you through many of clue i tried not to mess with your current relaitionship while still trying to exceed our current friendship you are the only thing i can think about sometimes in my thoughts,my dreams, and even my rhymes i want you close, i want you near, in my arms, i want you here Last edited by levitatinganimelover; Jun 19, 2007 at 08:06 AM. Reason: corrections
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!Mini Dev Banned Join Date: Jun 2007 Posts: 1,117 Thanks: 41 Thanked 25 Times in 25 Posts Credits: -80	Re: i love you thats happened to me once but that was just a superb poem i hope you write more and stay on this subject or on these lines it's very good thanks for the poem
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Lasura Angelic Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: In a Demon's Arms Posts: 1,869 Thanks: 56 Thanked 33 Times in 31 Posts Credits: 49,375	Re: i love you A great love poem, you've done a great work with this one... I like it very much... the love in this one seems so strong... beautifull!!!! ^^ The last stranza is just wonderful!!! adorable!!! great work!!! __________________ My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge
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Jun 19, 2007, 08:15 AM	#4 (permalink)
KuwiRules145 Tournaments Won: 2 ♡♥I love you Kyle Kun!♥♡ Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: In my lovers heart Posts: 963 Thanks: 3 Thanked 24 Times in 16 Posts Credits: 13,226	Re: i love you Awwww...this is a cute poem! That once happen to me when I was little so yeah! I just think it's romantic to read! I hope to see more! __________________ ♡♥♡♥No matter what I'll always love you for Eternity...I love you Kyle♥♡♥♡ Never let me go... hold me tight and love me like I do ♡♥Anime Life♥♡
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