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    i love you

    i love you
    yes its true
    i tried to tell you
    through many of clue

    i tried not to mess with
    your current relaitionship
    while still trying to exceed
    our current friendship

    you are the only thing i
    can think about sometimes
    in my thoughts,my dreams,
    and even my rhymes

    i want you close,
    i want you near,
    in my arms,
    i want you here
    Last edited by levitatinganimelover; Jun 19, 2007 at 08:06 AM. Reason: corrections

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    Re: i love you

    thats happened to me once but that was just a superb poem i hope you write more and stay on this subject or on these lines it's very good thanks for the poem

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    Re: i love you

    A great love poem, you've done a great work with this one... I like it very much... the love in this one seems so strong... beautifull!!!! ^^

    The last stranza is just wonderful!!! adorable!!! great work!!!

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: i love you

    Awwww...this is a cute poem! That once happen to me when I was little so yeah! I just think it's romantic to read! I hope to see more!
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