Thread: I Love You

Originally Posted by Seirika

On the wall written in blood said,
I love you and you knew it from the start,
Did you even care,
When you ripped me apart?

Thats alot of words to be writing in blood, don't ya think?
LOL

Anyway... I hope others will tell you they've enjoyed this as much as I did. I think alot of people see "I love you" for a title and think its just another sappy love poem. But this is actually a good read. Its was a bit dramatic for my taste, but I'm very appreciative of the efforts made to tell a story. It was almost like watching a short film. Not to mention your rhymes were pretty clever at certain points... and your rythm was flawless.. Keep up the good work.

Yea... a lot of words indeed... ^^ that's the only thing that's a lill off in this poem... but, we all understand that it's a poem and in poems some things are in a figurative sence and so are these words- they symbolise the fact that the lyrical "me" had a lot to say...

I must say: "Another amazingly good poem from Seirika..." I truly adore all your works 'till now... your skill is amazing...

I agree with Peach in every single aspect- I too thought that this will prpably be another salty love poem, but this is not... this is something truly amazing, truly wonderfull- you've managed to tell a story that would have taken me days to write in a beautiful poem and I admire you for that... Wonderful work indeed... keep it up!!! I'm your fan now ^^

Originally Posted by Peach_follows

Thats alot of words to be writing in blood, don't ya think?

It depends on where you cut yourself to get alot of blood.Like your left wrist,it has a vein that leads to your heart.Anyways I agree with you and Lasura about the title.But I found it abit convenient to use it.

AWESOME POEM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!! And it is a bit bloody but I still love it! It was so cool!!!! It's so romantic in a way to me and it rules with the words!!!! I hope to see more of your great poems!!!!

Originally Posted by Seirika

It depends on where you cut yourself to get alot of blood.Like your left wrist,it has a vein that leads to your heart.Anyways I agree with you and Lasura about the title.But I found it abit convenient to use it.

Well... that was a morbid thought... -_^

And as far as the title... I'm glad you did what you wanted..
better to please yourself that anyone else.