Anyway... I hope others will tell you they've enjoyed this as much as I did. I think alot of people see "I love you" for a title and think its just another sappy love poem. But this is actually a good read. Its was a bit dramatic for my taste, but I'm very appreciative of the efforts made to tell a story. It was almost like watching a short film. Not to mention your rhymes were pretty clever at certain points... and your rythm was flawless.. Keep up the good work.