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    Re: " I love you " Come suffer with me.

    That is really impressive keep it up

    I live in the shadows and I am as fast as the speed of light, but I use my ability's to help people even though they fear me for who I am.

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    Re: " I love you " Come suffer with me.

    wow that was pretty kool man. I like this four lines.
    Please don’t say no,
    And turn me away.
    Because I believe,
    ...I love you.

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    Re: " I love you " Come suffer with me.

    well if yor read my sig then youll pretty much know but this poem is cool it's kinda like a song that i heard long ago but this poem is really awsome dude keep up the good work..........^_^

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    Re: " I love you " Come suffer with me.

    wow... excellent work... the emotions are flooding... really great... sounds simple at first, but has a deeper meaning... great job!

    They say you can't use oversized signatures here on AO.

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    Re: " I love you " Come suffer with me.

    Great poem, really touching.
    Only real suggsestion would be that try to
    think when you change line, maybe bit better rythm.


    Love hurts...trust me I know, I really do...

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    Re: " I love you " Come suffer with me.

    Rythm is not my best quality.
    I will try it on something later ok.

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