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Reply With QuoteI do like the short stanza here. the first two verses are m favorite, and then it goes down hill from there. Mentall and physicall it's hard to keep the flow of the poem.
When I walked down a road
I walked down with you
You held my hand
You never let go
I gave you my all
I loved you all the way
I let go of all you're mistakes
And I watched you repeat them, once again
I loved you
I gave myself in
Against my own will
Even after you said sorry
I still loved you in everyway
Last edited by Star Girl; Nov 13, 2006 at 07:50 PM.
I do like the short stanza here. the first two verses are m favorite, and then it goes down hill from there. Mentall and physicall it's hard to keep the flow of the poem.
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great work i like it !!!!!!!!!!keep it up
keep writing
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