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    I Loved You

    When I walked down a road
    I walked down with you
    You held my hand
    You never let go
    I gave you my all
    I loved you all the way
    I let go of all you're mistakes
    And I watched you repeat them, once again
    I loved you
    I gave myself in
    Against my own will
    Even after you said sorry
    I still loved you in everyway
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    Re: I Loved Me

    I do like the short stanza here. the first two verses are m favorite, and then it goes down hill from there. Mentall and physicall it's hard to keep the flow of the poem.
    Seduced by Flesh


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    Re: I Loved Me

    great work i like it !!!!!!!!!! keep it up keep writing
    poohs my boo

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