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    You's Trollin Pro Leafblower Champion, Helicopter Champion ketaro is making a name for themselves ketaro is making a name for themselves ketaro's Avatar
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    I loved you

    Hello AO kiddies, i wrote this poem just recently and me thought i should share it with you all. It may not rhyme and all, but heck i never was good at poetry back in High School anyway. Although, i tried my best to make it work. My source of inspiration you may ask once you finish reading my crappy poem. Well, if you want to know pm me perhaps i might tell you.

    I loved you so much

    Always thinking about you I was
    Many hours I willingly wasted to get you back

    Although, it did not work out

    Lost and confused I was
    Of course I was. I had never experienced a break up
    So many nights I cried
    Even during the freaking day I would cry
    Rage is what now inhabits my fragile heart and for all the pain you caused you’ll pay a high price
    ps; Any good or bad feedback is welcome, Thank you for taking your time to read my poem.

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    Re: I loved you

    it's nice actuallt... nice touch of an mytonemy...(sorry for the spelling)

    anyway... i hope you wouldn't be that much of a pessimist... okay?

    just take it in slowly... you're boud to get over the pain eventually... or at least deal wth it or edur it properly.
    i'll choose to love whoever i wish to love and nobody can stop me from doing so ----

    crimson
    edited from SamBakZa.net

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    Re: I loved you

    Nice poem! Don't sweat it man, just a bump in the road! Don't take it to hard life's to important to waste it on anger. Try to move on no matter how hard it is and your not a loser!
    Last edited by yinyangAio1; Apr 18, 2008 at 06:20 AM. Reason: left something out

    oops...they saw us...*to you* Hi...you didn't just see that...

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    Thanks for your comments guys. Well, i wrote it one day i was bored and i didn't have anything to do.

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    I think your poem is great because it comes from the heart an some times words can't express what your heart feels by the tide of life

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    You've been creative Ket, I mean I never seen anything like these before, well sure there is Haiku and all that, but this is different and great thing. So I have to say is this is really great work you did.

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    i love it!! i'm a lover 2. i love how it from ur heart and its hard to put all ur pain and mixed feeling in to words.

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    Re: I loved you

    actually not bad at all.

    especially the vertical thing

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