nightmaregirl

Right now I'm in a better place,
and though we seem apart,
I'm closer than I ever was...
I'm there inside your heart.

I'm with you when you greet each day
and while the sun shines bright.
I'm there to share the sunsets too...
I'm with you every night.

The rainy days that we endured,
the joyful times we shared--
Just look inside your loving heart,
and you will find me there.

And when that day arrives
that we are no longer are apart,
I'll smile and hold you close to me...
forever in my heart.

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Joe Mage

Awesome poem. I loved it. I hope u will write more, I'll be lookin' forward to readin' more of ur work if u do. Thanx for it.

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xxoxx

and you write the better poem ..that was a cute poem ..
love to read it ..keep it up..

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Peach_follows

Wow... Im beside myself, almost speachless. This poem managed to pull out a plethera of emotions for me.
Like, its a beautiful poem, and it seems to indicate a feeling of comfort. But at the same time Its sad. The kind of comfort that a poem like this would attain, would only be saught after grieving someones loss.

So even though theres a heart warming reassurance, you can still feel the pain behind the loss.

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Lasura

A very nice poem indeed... full of love... nicely written... made me kind of sad and dreamy...and quite speechless too... lol

I really enjoyed reading this and I'd really wish to see more... A great work here...

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My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge