I'm just a little dark inside!

*jaderabbit* · May 29, 2006, 04:11 PM

Just a little dark inside!
jaderabbit(c)01

This is the story of God's little gift
I run around happy full of bliss
rotting corpses fill the air
putrid love ignites despair

Amiss the devils dreams
I run around full of anguish
humanity's happiness
pure love passionate sadness

What's wrong with my picture
im happy when im sad
but sad when im happy
lifes unfair to those in despair

I find my little happy place everytime i cry
Close mine eyes to see theres darkness inside!

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Small talk~~~ ranting of a lunatic ^_^
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Something a little dark you all eat that stuff up. I keep strict to my way of writing poems and keep a misterious side... but i let it slip a little in this poem on lines 9-12. heh, i hope you all can get the meaning its actually very simple.

Humans, always turn something bad into a good thing... even though its bad. But people always seem to find the bad into happiness as well. Is this what makes us humans.. and will it be our destruction or the reason we carry on the human bloodline into the future. I don't see much hope for this sad little world, but if thats the case... am i talking about myself as well?

We are only humans its are fate to be so; don't pretend ur somthing your not. Only God can determine otherwise. So lets go about our sad little lifes and enjoy them, otherwise your just going to cry about stuff you should be thankful for happining in the first place.
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Well comment and enjoy! critque is a good thing. "finding the good from the bad >.o"

tifa4cloud · May 29, 2006, 04:14 PM

im crazy too and i have no soul and my heart is pretty much black, hollow and cold

*ketaro* · May 29, 2006, 06:26 PM

That was an interesting poem jade, most teenager go throught that kinda of stuff. keep it up man.

*jaderabbit* · May 29, 2006, 06:46 PM

gasp! rabbit is 20 years old.~!
well that is a old poem i made a long time ago.

man i had so many mistakes ><,

Miyazaki_01 · May 30, 2006, 09:15 AM

That was very beautiful... *sniff, sniff*

sora the king of dreams · May 30, 2006, 12:49 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by jaderabbit

gasp! rabbit is 20 years old.~!
well that is a old poem i made a long time ago.

man i had so many mistakes ><,

it doesn't matter how old it is or how many mistake you had as long as you tried your best which It looks like you did.

*claps*

well done, well done

May 29, 2006, 04:11 PM	#1 (permalink)
jaderabbit Cheetos Overlord Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: The World Posts: 3,652 Thanks: 0 Thanked 4 Times in 3 Posts Credits: 7,474	I'm just a little dark inside! Just a little dark inside! jaderabbit(c)01 This is the story of God's little gift I run around happy full of bliss rotting corpses fill the air putrid love ignites despair Amiss the devils dreams I run around full of anguish humanity's happiness pure love passionate sadness What's wrong with my picture im happy when im sad but sad when im happy lifes unfair to those in despair I find my little happy place everytime i cry Close mine eyes to see theres darkness inside! --- Small talk~~~ ranting of a lunatic ^_^ --- Something a little dark you all eat that stuff up. I keep strict to my way of writing poems and keep a misterious side... but i let it slip a little in this poem on lines 9-12. heh, i hope you all can get the meaning its actually very simple. Humans, always turn something bad into a good thing... even though its bad. But people always seem to find the bad into happiness as well. Is this what makes us humans.. and will it be our destruction or the reason we carry on the human bloodline into the future. I don't see much hope for this sad little world, but if thats the case... am i talking about myself as well? We are only humans its are fate to be so; don't pretend ur somthing your not. Only God can determine otherwise. So lets go about our sad little lifes and enjoy them, otherwise your just going to cry about stuff you should be thankful for happining in the first place. --- Well comment and enjoy! critque is a good thing. "finding the good from the bad >.o" __________________ -Just another green eyed angel, distorted by mans love for hate- \|THE INFAMOUS\|The Host\|Twilight Series\|Twilight Movie\|Untouched!\| Last edited by jaderabbit; May 29, 2006 at 06:46 PM.
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