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Oct 26, 2007, 05:23 PM
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 Credits: 6,221 | I'm so sorry my love (part one) This is a poem I’m writing from my heart If you don’t understand it It’s because it’s not fully there The reason for this Is because I have a confession to make That while dating you I made a mistake So lets go back To the begging of our love story So that I can maybe explain Why my heart is like it is I was new Gave you a random Hi How are you You replied back to me And we started laughing Having fun Getting to know each other Well we started dating It was different from all the others We had our ups and down Until I found out about her That was the worst thing I ever dealt with What has caused me the most pain Because you see There we three The first I knew about For she had told me And I kept my feelings from her So that she wouldn’t see Then there was another That I still haven’t met Haven’t talked to But yet She had your heart |
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Oct 29, 2007, 05:43 AM
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Credits: 6,221 | Re: I'm so sorry my love (part one) Yes I did.. it didn't take me long to write all three parts due to the fact that when i wrote it... it just kinda.. came out.. And thank you for liking it even though it's sad.. ^-^ |
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Oct 29, 2007, 08:41 AM
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 Dragonrider  Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: On the back of my dragon escaping everything and ignoring the pain.
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Credits: 4,734 | Re: I'm so sorry my love (part one) Wow angelic you have a way with poems! keep it up I liked it although I have to agree with blackbird this is completely different from your other works! keep it up I hope to see more from you.
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Oct 29, 2007, 08:50 AM
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Credits: 155,765 | Re: I'm so sorry my love (part one) Wow! That hurts! It was great! So sad that you have to feel that way though. Well I like your work keep it up! look forward to the rest!
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