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    I made it

    You always said
    I’d never make it

    Always you who
    put me down

    Saying this and that
    and looking mean

    You never believed
    I’d grow up to be good

    You never thought
    that I had enough will

    Well look around
    I am now the one who’s on top

    You always said
    I’d never make it

    But I did
    thanks mom


    This is for those who know what it's like living with parents who argue, who don't believe and who don't love...
    the love you withhold is the pain you carry.

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    Re: I made it

    Angry much Well I can't say I know what u r going through. But most parents nag and harass, because they love you. I was once the person in your story and I hated them for not letting me do what I wanted, but in hind sight I see just how stupid I really was. Man I sould be dead now, Thanks mom:kiss:

    Personaly it needs work, You went on a rant and no why you got there. Tell us you story next time, not just the out come.
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    Re: I made it

    Well, this is a cute poem. I'd suggest combining the stanzas to make it seem a bit longer. Or giving some more elaboration.
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    Re: I made it

    Quote Originally Posted by Kasai View Post
    Well, this is a cute poem.
    i agree it si cute this is somthing that we have all experience in some point and time the feel, like our parents are aginst us, holding us back or controling our lifes.
    just pure alittle more of that feeling into it

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