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    I Miss My Rain.

    I miss the sound of the rain tapping on my face.
    How it touches and rolls down my cheeks.

    I wonder when the rain would come.
    I wonder if it still remembers my name and all my secrets.

    To the window pane I see the bright yellow sun.

    But not the dark clouds that carries my secrets.

    I wonder when you'll come again my rain?
    So I can whisper my greatest and deepest secrets to you.

    Come now, rain.
    And fill me in.

    ~~~~~
    This is pretty random.
    I just made it a couple of minutes ago.
    I know its not that good.
    But...
    It's from the bottom of my heart.
    And I love it.

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    Re: I Miss My Rain.

    It's actually really nice... and when something like this comes from the bottom of your heart, it means you actually put alot of effort into it.

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    Re: I Miss My Rain.

    Quote Originally Posted by DemonicKagomeTahoshi View Post
    It's actually really nice... and when something like this comes from the bottom of your heart, it means you actually put alot of effort into it.
    Aww.

    *teary-eyed*

    Thank you.

    Fufu.

    I was a bit inspired.

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    Re: I Miss My Rain.

    Quote Originally Posted by ayu View Post
    Aww.

    *teary-eyed*

    Thank you.

    Fufu.

    I was a bit inspired.
    I can see your inspiration. Beautiful Ayu. I love that you were able to pull your heart into it. I can see that in each line.

    Far be it for me to be anything special, when the only special thing I desire with me, is the special person I share my gifts with.

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    Re: I Miss My Rain.

    Quote Originally Posted by Shade/K' Heart View Post
    I can see your inspiration. Beautiful Ayu. I love that you were able to pull your heart into it. I can see that in each line.
    *gasp*

    Hey!

    You!

    Wahh~

    I haven't seen you in a while!

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