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    I Miss You Forever

    I never count on yesterday
    Because the past may not exist
    I'll never give myself away
    When there's reason to resist
    Words draped in crystals melt away

    Outside the snow keeps falling
    If you're cold then I'll come calling
    These winter days I find
    Seems you're always on my mind

    Oh if you only knew
    Just how much I think of you
    I might not be so cold
    If I had your hand to hold

    I miss you
    Always
    And Forever.....



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    Re: I Miss You Forever

    Thats such a sweet poem Akura. It made me think of someone miss. My favorite part was: "if you only knew just how much I think of you" Great work!^^

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    Re: I Miss You Forever

    Thank you very much AngelFlow! I'm trying my best to win POTW or POTM!



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    Re: I Miss You Forever

    Really a nice poem, I like how you've described the cold winter here... Also I like the idea you're telling here... And the first stranza really made me think about life...

    I enjoyed reading this... A nice wrok you've done here!!!

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    Awww thank you so much Lasura! I appreciate it! Yeah, this took a while to think up lol!



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    Re: I Miss You Forever

    I loved this poem it just reminds me of my love of how much he'll just miss me if I leave. This is just a great job since this is so good and I loved it of course so I hope to see more!
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    Re: I Miss You Forever

    Yay! I'm glad you all like it! Hey, if any of you don't mind, can you please rate this? My points are so low....I barely have any left.....



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    Re: I Miss You Forever

    Punctuation would actually help the flow of this poem, I believe.
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