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    I must not Chase the Boys

    Edited by Kedar:

    Poem deleted since it's Plagiarized!
    Last edited by kedar; Oct 03, 2006 at 07:44 AM.

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    Lol you dont want to chase the boys but u want to "give" into the woman in you...
    ur contridiciting urself. Nice flow of the poem and the wording is alright. I didn't like the last 2 lines im nto going to lie... i think the poem had some mroe potential
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    Nice poem equin, so you are not chasing boys no more instead you'll chase girls or something like that. jk lol.

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    nice poem equinn. i like it alot. nice poem. and stay away from boys. i can tell you have that bad. lol

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    I like the title more than the poem Equinn..

    But still, its a nice fun poem!

    Maybe a bit longer though?

    TY Sasurai for the lovely sig!*

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    a few grammartical mistakes here n there but overall kinda funny in sense that u want to be the woman inside u but they're stopping u from doing tht

    Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra

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    well well well~ Look who cliping there wings~ xD lol~

    o.o hmm well most have been said, but I do wish you make them a tad bite bigger~ as in longer.

    ^_^ Nice, need some inprovement thou.
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    thanks every one ^_^ im glade u liked it ^_^

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