I need someone

I need someone to put me to sleep
In late evenings when I'm too tired to leave
I need someone to blow on my wounds
When my breath seems just too hot

I need someone to hold me tight
When the pain seems too hard to bear
I need someone to tell me it will be alright
When hope seems to fade away

I need someone to kiss my tears away
When it all breaks apart in front of my eyes
I need someone to say I did good
When even I don't believe in myself

I need someone who would love me
Just as much as I love him
I need someone who cares for me
So much he will stand strong

How long am I to wait?
How far am I to travel?
How much pain do I still have to bear?
I need someone who needs me just as much...

Just wrote this in two minutes...

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Originally Posted by Lasura

I need someone to tell me it will be alright
When hope seems to fade away

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These are my favorite lines. I think that if I had that... I would always have hope.

This poem made me cry. Its hard to want something that bad... and not be sure if it or when it will happen.

I love it. Even if it was written in 2 minutes. "The best poems come from the top of your head, and the pit of your soul" - Me

WoW! @.@ made you cry? You made Me cry with these words...

And it is a very good quote... have to remember that!!! I totaly agree with that statement...

Anyways thank You very, very much for this comment!!!!!!!

EXTREMELY GOOD I LOVED IT SO MUCH.ABSOLUTELY FABOLOUS.

Quote:

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Originally Posted by Lasura

I need someone to put me to sleep
In late evenings when I'm too tired to leave
I need someone to blow on my wounds
When my breath seems just too hot

I need someone to hold me tight
When the pain seems too hard to bear
I need someone to tell me it will be alright
When hope seems to fade away

I need someone to kiss my tears away
When it all breaks apart in front of my eyes
I need someone to say I did good
When even I don't believe in myself

I need someone who would love me
Just as much as I love him
I need someone who cares for me
So much he will stand strong

How long am I to wait?
How far am I to travel?
How much pain do I still have to bear?
I need someone who needs me just as much...

Just wrote this in two minutes...

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wow that was awsome i loved it that was amazing i cant wate to reed more

Agrees with the 2 ~! :) i totally like it too... but it made u sound so lonely..
:/ anyway....u are getting much and much better in poetry laura~! and u are like a rival now :D :p jk ^^

Keep up the good work~! :)

Haha, if you wrote this in TWO minutes, this really shows that this prominent feeling of dread and desire was really swelling up. It's amazing, too, because you described everything you felt with such words.

Why thank You guys!!!! ^^ It seems I got myself new fans!!! (ilovenaruto) Ok, I'm joking- I don't have fans, but I'm glad to see new people posting on my poems!!! ^^

And I'm so glad you like this one that much levitatinganimelover!!! And to hear that Ray is finding me as a rival already- just great!!! But I have to learn to write scary, creepy ones... I wish I could... they're so cool

Well, I'm not totaly lonely, there just are some weird moments ^^

And thank You Rave!!! And really- I was planing on writing soething like this for a long time, I had the words "I need someone to put me to bed" in my head all the time, and today I had my inspiration. ^^