I need you guys to pick a name for this

The bells are ringing
A soft breeze through the air
The birds are singing
the wind plays with your hair

New life emerges all about
The dew easy to see
Beautiful flowers begin to sprout
Squirrles rummage about the trees

A new feeling in the air
A new time beginning
A new smell tickles your nose
A new sun, soft yet still cold...

The sun sinks
stars rising
the moons glare
hypnotizing

Dozing off
dreaming
a kiss so soft
in your ear she is singing

As you awaken
she smiles
Your breath taken
You close your eyes

One thing
That perfect kiss
Never leaving
never leaving this.

well there is a place and time that can be described by that "sumer time once again" good poem by the way ^.^

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Originally Posted by basilisk888

well there is a place and time that can be described by that "sumer time once again" good poem by the way ^.^

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it is actually about spring xD but it intales the kiss ... thats what i need to name it about.... lol i just dont know what to name it

I think you should be able to name it "New Ordeal" or maybe "Shining Life"
These two names i suggested talk about what you have mentioned in your poem here, as well how everything in the spring does work out in every problem to a solution of any kind that refers in. I hope these titles can help you work out on your description of your interesting poetry.

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Originally Posted by dark1angel

I think you should be able to name it "New Ordeal" or maybe "Shining Life"
These two names i suggested talk about what you have mentioned in your poem here, as well how everything in the spring does work out in every problem to a solution of any kind that refers in. I hope these titles can help you work out on your description of your interesting poetry.

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i like that one
i think ill use that
thank you very much

The poem is nicely done i was thinking more on the title : My perfect Kiss or something like that.

i think shining life is a good idea a kiss brings a shinnig light of happiness