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    Shining Life

    The bells are ringing
    A soft breeze through the air
    The birds are singing
    the wind plays with your hair

    New life emerges all about
    The dew easy to see
    Beautiful flowers begin to sprout
    Squirrles rummage about the trees

    A new feeling in the air
    A new time beginning
    A new smell tickles your nose
    A new sun, soft yet still cold...

    The sun sinks
    stars rising
    the moons glare
    hypnotizing

    Dozing off
    dreaming
    a kiss so soft
    in your ear she is singing

    As you awaken
    she smiles
    Your breath taken
    You close your eyes

    One thing
    That perfect kiss
    Never leaving
    never leaving this.
    Last edited by starfire1036; Apr 29, 2008 at 01:44 PM. Reason: new title

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    Re: I need you guys to pick a name for this

    well there is a place and time that can be described by that "sumer time once again" good poem by the way ^.^
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    Re: I need you guys to pick a name for this

    Quote Originally Posted by basilisk888 View Post
    well there is a place and time that can be described by that "sumer time once again" good poem by the way ^.^
    it is actually about spring xD but it intales the kiss ... thats what i need to name it about.... lol i just dont know what to name it

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    Re: I need you guys to pick a name for this

    I think you should be able to name it "New Ordeal" or maybe "Shining Life"
    These two names i suggested talk about what you have mentioned in your poem here, as well how everything in the spring does work out in every problem to a solution of any kind that refers in. I hope these titles can help you work out on your description of your interesting poetry.

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    Re: I need you guys to pick a name for this

    Quote Originally Posted by dark1angel View Post
    I think you should be able to name it "New Ordeal" or maybe "Shining Life"
    These two names i suggested talk about what you have mentioned in your poem here, as well how everything in the spring does work out in every problem to a solution of any kind that refers in. I hope these titles can help you work out on your description of your interesting poetry.
    i like that one
    i think ill use that
    thank you very much

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    Re: I need you guys to pick a name for this

    The poem is nicely done i was thinking more on the title : My perfect Kiss or something like that.
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    Re: I need you guys to pick a name for this

    i think shining life is a good idea a kiss brings a shinnig light of happiness
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