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Reply With QuoteI love your poem. I can relate to the feelings in this, especially at this moment. I love reading things I relate to, because I can understand it more. Great Work! ^_^
I cry my tears
As I reach out to you
I breathe deeply
You running through my mind
I wish just to hear your voice
It kills me when not hearing from you
I worry of what happened
Do you look up at the stars?
See me in the moonlight like I see you?
Do your heartaches like mine?
I feel your pain and I know you wish for me
A change been made of me
I go crazy if I just don't hear you
Here I can't help but cry and plead
I know you haven't left me
I know you want me just like I want you
I seek you and your warmth
I crave you so deeply
Everytime I close my eyes, I see you
You're my light that surrounds me
As I cry, your name whisper from my lips
Our love is strong
I can't carry on without you
My dearly forever, I await for you
♥ (¯'·._.·[ＧＥＩＳＨＡ ゲイシャ]·._.·'¯) ♥
I love your poem. I can relate to the feelings in this, especially at this moment. I love reading things I relate to, because I can understand it more. Great Work! ^_^
Come dance in the rain with me, no one is watching.
Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed my poem! It makes me happy that people like my work
♥ (¯'·._.·[ＧＥＩＳＨＡ ゲイシャ]·._.·'¯) ♥
The wording isnt great and correct punctuation is needed for flow.
Seduced by Flesh
*pouts*.....oh I guess it wasn't good then....thanks anyway Kasai-san....
♥ (¯'·._.·[ＧＥＩＳＨＡ ゲイシャ]·._.·'¯) ♥
I see a couple of grammatical mistakes, like changing do to does in the line where is says "do you heartache like mine" Other than that it is a nice poem! Keep up the good work Hieislove!
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