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Jan 17, 2007, 07:50 AM
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 | I need you love I cry my tears As I reach out to you I breathe deeply You running through my mind I wish just to hear your voice It kills me when not hearing from you I worry of what happened Do you look up at the stars? See me in the moonlight like I see you? Do your heartaches like mine? I feel your pain and I know you wish for me A change been made of me I go crazy if I just don't hear you Here I can't help but cry and plead I know you haven't left me I know you want me just like I want you I seek you and your warmth I crave you so deeply Everytime I close my eyes, I see you You're my light that surrounds me As I cry, your name whisper from my lips Our love is strong I can't carry on without you My dearly forever, I await for you
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Jan 17, 2007, 08:10 AM
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| Re: I need you love I love your poem. I can relate to the feelings in this, especially at this moment. I love reading things I relate to, because I can understand it more. Great Work! ^_^
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Jan 17, 2007, 08:14 AM
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| Re: I need you love Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed my poem! It makes me happy that people like my work
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Jan 23, 2007, 07:30 AM
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| Re: I need you love *pouts*.....oh I guess it wasn't good then....thanks anyway Kasai-san....
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Jan 23, 2007, 10:42 AM
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| Re: I need you love I see a couple of grammatical mistakes, like changing do to does in the line where is says "do you heartache like mine" Other than that it is a nice poem! Keep up the good work Hieislove!
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