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    I was never good at titles...

    Alone with my thoughts
    And the anger that grows
    Like a raging beast
    That doesn't know where to stop
    Holding it back but not for long
    When will this beast...
    Kill them all?
    The beautiful Maiden
    My glorious Queen
    Without her
    I would be in prison
    Rotting for the sins I would commit
    But how long will her power hold back
    Hold back this beast within me
    Ending her life
    And the life of my family
    So they won't suffer
    So they won't carry my burden anymore
    These are my desires
    My reality being held back
    Held back by the chains of love
    But everyday
    I ask myself why
    Why...



    I don't really care if its good or not I just needed to vent a little

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    thats the best poem ive heard in while it ain't the best but it's up there
    Magna is AWSOME

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    Hmm. Longer verses would have given it more depth, in my opinion.
    Seduced by Flesh


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