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    Fallen Angel PhoenixSara may be famous one day PhoenixSara's Avatar
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    I only wish to be with you

    The words you say sound like a song in my heart,
    praying every minute we won't be apart.
    Growing and falling each day,
    Reeling, soaring, surely love has found it's way.

    I see that you are true,I was the one who had doubts.
    Can you blame one who has been so badly hurt
    and severly injured emotionally in the past.
    HUrting, loving, Confused and in a daze
    Hoping these doubts are nothing but a phase.

    How do I say? How do I ask?
    How do i put it down in paper all I want to ask.
    Falling for someone and getting to know you more,
    I just hope am not setting myself for a fall.
    Wondering, asking, flying and soaring to you,
    I only hope i don't make the distance
    to grow farther much more.

    What should i tell you to know my feelings are true?
    What should i do to make you see that i am not like the rest.
    I only wish the feeling is mutual , like you I am scared
    that my heart will get beaten up again.
    Scared,wanting, needing to be the one,
    I also have baggage i wish was not my own.

    Your pain i want to take away,
    Your heart i want to shelter.
    Protect you from those who want to do you harm.
    Loving,Protecting and caring for the one that matters to my heart.
    Letting go of all my pain and doubts.
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    Fallen Angel of Darkness mangalovertje may be famous one day mangalovertje may be famous one day mangalovertje's Avatar
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    Somewhere I can be at peace...With my mind and my heart...In the Darkness...
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    Re: I only wish to be with you

    This is a really beautiful poem..
    It just describes people how they can feel...
    This is how I feel..
    So unsure what to do about it...
    Really keep it up...^_^
    We are affraid of losing controle...But why should you be affraid of losing it...While you didnt have it...

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    yuthar is off to a good start
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    Re: I only wish to be with you

    a nice poem and I like it !!!!
    please try another one
    I am also writing poems but in Myanmar language
    come and see
    ေခတ္သစ္ ပန္းပု

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    Otaku DemonicKagomeTahoshi is off to a good start DemonicKagomeTahoshi's Avatar
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    Always with my lover in his hearts, or with him no matter what
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    Re: I only wish to be with you

    I like the poem, it's really nice, and i think you should do more.

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