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Reply With Quotei like how you hate flows through this poem saying you
are the fool for fallign for his lies. its true every relationship needs respect
and you pointed that out very well here awesome poem
This is about the simplist piece of crap poem i have written. Adding it took about a minute and 10 seconds to write. I just want to spill a little.Probably sounds like every other bad relationship poem out there.
Walk away
I try to say to myself
That this is the last time
Say over and over again
That we can make this work
Trust in you
That you wont hurt me
But every time
I’m fooled
I must be the fool
To think that you
Could ever respect me
Or even a chance that you could ever
Love me again
I'm a glass child. I am Hannah's regrets. Monster.
i like how you hate flows through this poem saying you
are the fool for fallign for his lies. its true every relationship needs respect
and you pointed that out very well here awesome poem
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
Isolate and save you from yourself
Your not supposed to like it Chalice!!!!!
I'm a glass child. I am Hannah's regrets. Monster.
it is too straight forward, lack of depth and imagry. of course it was rushed so you get a freebie there...it just seemed like random thoughts putting down with no real meaning in them.
How very correct you are! I wasnt looking for it to be added to my awesome masterpieces! Like i said, this is poo, and there for we must throw poo at it!
I'm a glass child. I am Hannah's regrets. Monster.
Only monkies throw poo. This poem is, as you said, like many others before it. It is not completely crap. It is a little short, but add some body and PRESTO! You have another great work.
I wouldn't call this poem a piece of crap, it was a kool poem, keep it up nympho.
liked it doing good keep it up. :>
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