I'm not fond of the spacing and there are spelling errors. And I would like to see punctuation.
I run faster and faster in fear
I here your voice getting louder
You chase me down the hall
out the door into the world
I scream "I HATE YOU!"
you just sniker and throw a dagger at me
it hits me in the leg
I cry out for help
but no one hears me
I am all alone
someone hear me out
cause I'm drownding in a pool of dought
I wish someone could save me
tell me it's alright
but I know that I'm far from winning this fight
I pull out the dagger and throw it at your head
I miss and hit your shoulder and scream out "GO AWAY YOU KILLED DAD!"
you just stand there looking at me
no saddness in your eyes
now from time to time I wonder
why I'm still alive
you had left me long ago
because of what you did
now I sit all alone
you are my blaring sin
~End~![]()
When you walk away
You don't hear me say please. Oh baby, don't go
Simple and clean is the way that you're making me feel tonight. It's hard to let it go
I'm not fond of the spacing and there are spelling errors. And I would like to see punctuation.
Seduced by Flesh
sounds like your discribing some thing simmalur to my life
that's quite kool!!![]()
I'v been cheatigh death for 18 years![]()
I must have some thing protecting me![]()
thanx. and thats cool. but hay. we all can only run for so long that it finaly gets us
When you walk away
You don't hear me say please. Oh baby, don't go
Simple and clean is the way that you're making me feel tonight. It's hard to let it go
you know the first thing i thought of when i read this was naruto . was this written from some metaphoric version of something in your life or was it something completely made up? i like it's intersting and it paints a picture in your head. it's good.
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