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    Thumbs down I run faster and faster

    I run faster and faster in fear

    I here your voice getting louder

    You chase me down the hall

    out the door into the world

    I scream "I HATE YOU!"

    you just sniker and throw a dagger at me

    it hits me in the leg

    I cry out for help

    but no one hears me

    I am all alone

    someone hear me out

    cause I'm drownding in a pool of dought

    I wish someone could save me

    tell me it's alright

    but I know that I'm far from winning this fight

    I pull out the dagger and throw it at your head

    I miss and hit your shoulder and scream out "GO AWAY YOU KILLED DAD!"

    you just stand there looking at me

    no saddness in your eyes

    now from time to time I wonder

    why I'm still alive

    you had left me long ago

    because of what you did

    now I sit all alone

    you are my blaring sin

    ~End~
    When you walk away
    You don't hear me say please. Oh baby, don't go
    Simple and clean is the way that you're making me feel tonight. It's hard to let it go

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    Re: I run faster and faster

    I'm not fond of the spacing and there are spelling errors. And I would like to see punctuation.
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    Re: I run faster and faster

    sounds like your discribing some thing simmalur to my life
    that's quite kool!!
    I'v been cheatigh death for 18 years
    I must have some thing protecting me

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    Re: I run faster and faster

    thanx. and thats cool. but hay. we all can only run for so long that it finaly gets us
    When you walk away
    You don't hear me say please. Oh baby, don't go
    Simple and clean is the way that you're making me feel tonight. It's hard to let it go

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    Re: I run faster and faster

    you know the first thing i thought of when i read this was naruto . was this written from some metaphoric version of something in your life or was it something completely made up? i like it's intersting and it paints a picture in your head. it's good.
    every rose has a thorn

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