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Reply With QuoteA very good poem Chris...I never knew you wrote poems. It can be very true for some people...but is this true for you? Standing alone against the pains of the wolrd is not easy, the people that care for you will always be there for you...
Lifes tribulations and fustration's piss me off
it's like taking a nail and scraping it aganst a chalk
board that send's tingle's down you your spine
everyone they smile at me, and say that there my
friend's but when trouble come's knocking at my
door I STAND ALONE!!
No comfert from you do i get i stand alone,
no tear from you is sweet i can only watch as my
world crumble's there no going back this time
I STAND ALONE!! you can go to hell with you
cute smile its not what i wanted at all from you,
yet your to clueless t see that .
Everyone comes running when they have there
hard time's all there griping and complaning
spirals out of control i need some help from somone
but its not comming anytime soon because everytime
i aks for help I STAND ALONE!!
ok this is my next attempt at a poem i hope this one is better than my other's
Last edited by HolderOfTheDarkChalice; Jul 24, 2006 at 03:20 PM.
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
Isolate and save you from yourself
A very good poem Chris...I never knew you wrote poems. It can be very true for some people...but is this true for you? Standing alone against the pains of the wolrd is not easy, the people that care for you will always be there for you...
If you strive for one thing in life for so long...It's a given you'll miss others along the way...that's how it is...That's life
It shows lots of emotion which is very good in a poem. Now...whether those feelings are wrong are right are completely up to you. But hey, it's typical human nature to flee when something troubling comes along. As Lord of Chaos said, those who really care for you will be there for you when they can. ^^
snaps for chris!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Born to rule, raised to lead, taught to establish: The African Queen
thanks and your right peole are always going to run thats when you see who your real freinds are . and as for your question Loc yea its true to a point but im getting a handle on it but its hard to do when youre the only one trying lol
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
Isolate and save you from yourself
every animal stands alone when you get right down to it........
NoT tHe SiGgY yOu R lOOkInG 4
Move Along.
every animal has to stand alone but they would prefer a pack or clan
wich ever animal you choose but i think it all depends on the person really
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
Isolate and save you from yourself
Not bad.... Nice one too^^
Carve an amble now,
Saying that the day's still bright,
And let's play with time.
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