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    Re: I Stand Alone!!

    thanks its my first poem in like a month im trying to get better i think this is but not sure
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: I Stand Alone!!

    *applause* that's strong! XD

    you can go to hell with you
    cute smile its not what i wanted at all from you,
    Lolz!! I like this one.

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    Re: I Stand Alone!!

    You betcha! In the end everything that breathes dies alone...
    NoT tHe SiGgY yOu R lOOkInG 4
    Move Along.

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    Re: I Stand Alone!!

    thank Aya-kun my sheepy sis im glad you liked it
    i will post more after i get better with my wriiting
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: I Stand Alone!!

    u say this is u're first attempt? dam tht's good for a first try.....U're the only asking for help, u're sick of it......u truly stand alone as u reject everyone else

    nice keep it up

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    Re: I Stand Alone!!

    Wow awesome poem Chris H. I thought it was wonderful,sad but still wonderful.
    Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^

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    thanks this was my first attemp at a poem here and im glad you liked it i did try one other but it sucked lol
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: I Stand Alone!!

    Bravo!! *claps* That's a great poem.... but sad^^ I'm new... But it's not wrong to give comments, right?

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