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Reply With Quotevery awesom poem i like this alot and can relate to the feeling here
as well , when you feel deeply enough for somone you will do just about anything to stay with them. that is what i get from this i loved it alot
One time I found a girl
who was screaming for help
she had been abused by men
I took and carry her to the hostpit-el (just to make it rime i know is -al)
To make her better would take a while
3 hours hours i had spend
waiting and thinking if she's ok
It was a cold morning
and I was in a deep sleep
still thinking about how she feels
Will she be ok?
or will she be in a bed forever?
(Never leave someone aside)
Last edited by Baal; Oct 26, 2006 at 07:40 PM.
perdoname michelle!
very awesom poem i like this alot and can relate to the feeling here
as well , when you feel deeply enough for somone you will do just about anything to stay with them. that is what i get from this i loved it alot
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
Isolate and save you from yourself
That was a good poem. It had one or two errors in it,but other than that you did a nice job. I look forward to reading more of your work.
"Sunset Kisses Along The Beach"
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