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    I still have my love (I)

    One time I found a girl
    who was screaming for help
    she had been abused by men
    I took and carry her to the hostpit-el (just to make it rime i know is -al)
    To make her better would take a while
    3 hours hours i had spend
    waiting and thinking if she's ok
    It was a cold morning
    and I was in a deep sleep
    still thinking about how she feels
    Will she be ok?
    or will she be in a bed forever?


    (Never leave someone aside)
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    Re: I still have my love (I)

    very awesom poem i like this alot and can relate to the feeling here
    as well , when you feel deeply enough for somone you will do just about anything to stay with them. that is what i get from this i loved it alot
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: I still have my love (I)

    That was a good poem. It had one or two errors in it,but other than that you did a nice job. I look forward to reading more of your work.
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