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    「Someone」 Goo Slasher Champion, Fish Kill Champion, Rapid Motion Champion, Cell-Out Champion, Sober Santa 2 Champion, Flower Girl Champion KuwiRules145 is off to a good start KuwiRules145's Avatar
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    I still love you

    I don't want to runaway but I don't understand
    Why do I still try to hold your hand
    Am I another of those side charms
    All I want to be is in your arms
    I try to pretend your already mine
    But it just heart-breaks me making you fine
    But I don't really care
    Just at least our hearts share
    I don't care if you use me like a puppet
    I'm just glad that we met
    I'll be your slave any way
    Just promise me you'll be with me everyday
    Hurt me, love me, hate me, do anything to me too
    As long as I'm with you
    I would never want to say goodbye
    Say I love you even if it's just a lie
    Is there anyway I can stay with you
    Just remember that I still love you too

    Hope you like it! I was in a hurry so sorry if you don't like it.
    「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」

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    Re: I still love you

    I like it, kinda reminds me of a relationship with a guy friend of mine.

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    Re: I still love you

    Hmm... reminds me of my poem "Agreement", I see you feel about love just as I do... ^^ Enjoy every single moment of it- good and bad...

    A nice poem Kuwi, enjoyed reading it, it's simply sweet... Love it! And I'll be waiting for another poem ^^

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    Re: I still love you

    Awsome poem Kiwi noodle! You are very good at poetry! Excelent job!



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    Awww....I thank you all really! I thank you! I thank you! I really thank you!
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    Re: I still love you

    Quote Originally Posted by Akura13 View Post
    Awsome poem Kiwi noodle! You are very good at poetry! Excelent job!
    ????noodle????? anyway great poem i reall like it!!

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    Thank you so much little negi! I really thank you as well! So THANK YOU!!!!!!!
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    Re: I still love you

    i like it very romantic and a little sad but keep it up kiwi youll get alot better
    Yeah, Bye.

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