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    I Still Remember...

    Love
    That mystery
    Love
    That unknown discovery

    Remember when we held our hands?
    And said : what is this beautiful feeling?
    Remember when we promised to discover love?
    The memories that we build along our adventures together
    They will remain here with me forever
    My Love
    I miss you
    And I wrote a poem just for You

    "Come along
    Let us raise our flag of faith
    The faith our undying love
    The overflowing passion and the consuming love that runs through our hearts
    Together we set our hearts sails
    To run through this world endlessly
    I remember when I first fell in love with you
    I remember the miracle i saw
    The only one I believed in
    I remember seeing you
    The memories
    Of your warmness
    Your kind arms around me
    your overflowing love sorrounding me
    And your moon light smile
    You always said it was me
    No, It's in fact we
    In history you and i were meant to be
    My Love
    If I would ever come to an eternal sleep
    The only thing I would dream about is you
    And that good-bye
    Would break my heart and leave it to die
    If I lose you i would endlessly cry
    I wish for us to be together forever
    Away from this ugly life
    Together let us fly
    Up in the sky, so high...
    Together to laugh and cry
    And together never to say good-bye"

    I still remember that you loved me even in death
    But After you left
    My Heart Left This World With You...
    My Love
    I Still Remember You
    I Still Remember Loving You
    Power -xxx- aka -M.Ali
    I Fly Swiftly through the air
    I Spread My Wings Without A trace

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    Re: I Still Remember...

    Nice poem, but the second stanza is kinda long but still a very good poem.

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    Re: I Still Remember...

    The poem is good, just I have to agree with Ketaro! The second stanza is pretty long, but still good!

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    Re: I Still Remember...

    The first stanza is the only good thing about it.
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