Thread: I think you've finally done it.

Originally Posted by bratling

I think you guys have done it.
I think you've finally won.
With all the things I wanted.
This certianly wasn't one.

The pain I give MYSELF
Was almost too much to bare.
But it wasn't enough for any of you.
You had to see my misery too.

Well here it is.
My pain caused because of me
Being too hard on myself.
My pain cause because of you
Delighting in my torment.
My pain because of unthought decisions.
Haunting all my thoughts.
My pain caused by lonliness.
Is going to be all I've got.

Wow, this was a really sad poem.

I hope this isn't from real life experience, cause if it is...

Don't Worry, BE HAPPY lol

But I did think It was very good and had plenty of depth.

Originally Posted by ILikeApples5520

Wow, this was a really sad poem.

I hope this isn't from real life experience, cause if it is...

Don't Worry, BE HAPPY lol

But I did think It was very good and had plenty of depth.

Unfortunately it's pretty real. But I'll get through it I suppose. I always do in the end cus I'm still here right?

THank you very much. I'm glad you liked it.