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    I think you've finally done it.

    I think you guys have done it.
    I think you've finally won.
    With all the things I wanted.
    This certianly wasn't one.

    The pain I give MYSELF
    Was almost too much to bare.
    But it wasn't enough for any of you.
    You had to see my misery too.

    Well here it is.
    My pain caused because of me
    Being too hard on myself.
    My pain cause because of you
    Delighting in my torment.
    My pain because of unthought decisions.
    Haunting all my thoughts.
    My pain caused by lonliness.
    Is going to be all I've got.
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    Re: I think you've finally done it.

    Quote Originally Posted by bratling View Post
    I think you guys have done it.
    I think you've finally won.
    With all the things I wanted.
    This certianly wasn't one.

    The pain I give MYSELF
    Was almost too much to bare.
    But it wasn't enough for any of you.
    You had to see my misery too.

    Well here it is.
    My pain caused because of me
    Being too hard on myself.
    My pain cause because of you
    Delighting in my torment.
    My pain because of unthought decisions.
    Haunting all my thoughts.
    My pain caused by lonliness.
    Is going to be all I've got.
    Wow, this was a really sad poem.

    I hope this isn't from real life experience, cause if it is...

    Don't Worry, BE HAPPY lol

    But I did think It was very good and had plenty of depth.


    Thanks to _gwenibe_ for this awesome sig!

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    Re: I think you've finally done it.

    Quote Originally Posted by ILikeApples5520 View Post
    Wow, this was a really sad poem.

    I hope this isn't from real life experience, cause if it is...

    Don't Worry, BE HAPPY lol

    But I did think It was very good and had plenty of depth.
    Unfortunately it's pretty real. But I'll get through it I suppose. I always do in the end cus I'm still here right?

    THank you very much. I'm glad you liked it.

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