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  1. Apr 16, 2008 08:34 PM #1
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    I thought you were

    Here is a short poem i wrote back in 04 or 05 i can't quite remember. I know its too repetitive, i just felt like writing back then.

    I thought you were a rose
    I thought you were my hope
    I thought you were my great love
    I thought you were the purest girl in the world
    I thought you were my life
    I thought you were what kept me alive
    I thought you were the greatest person in my world
    I thought i could trust your words
    I thought i could love you more
    Ps: I was a young lad when i wrote this. As a matter of fact i was 15, me was little
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    Re: I thought you were

    I thought the poem was very nice! What happened to make you want to post it? I trust everybody and their words so I'd fall for some of the stupidest things!

    oops...they saw us...*to you* Hi...you didn't just see that...
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    Re: I thought you were

    nice poem ^.^ just wondering was this about an exp.? Or did you just make it up? But It is nice and has good format and everything
    death and life are one and the same
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    Re: I thought you were

    love the poem very sad but yet very true sometimes you can not trust everyone and that is the sad part because you do not know you do you trust
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