Thread: I want care for your death

You take the plunge never to
return i clap my hand's at your
demise ,no tears will i shed when
you throw your life away,hate me
if you will but giving up sickens me.
......
The deed is done i stand alone as
they put you in the ground,i toss
a black rose on your grave knowing
hell is where your at.

hm.. careless.
you want to careless but you know you cannot.
huh.. many people can make you want to do that...
but, can you...

hm..

what is a heart?
what is a conciousness?
if we do not know...
which path will we chose..
but.. you.. choose both of it
and so do I.
is that the last piece of the friendship which had broken...
that hold you there..
hold you at the place where you still want to
..
be a friend


hm...

my friend, do you realize it.
do you know that i care you
but, you....


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hm... quite the same experience of being like that
make other people know how it feel.

meh~

The title says it all eh~

I like the peom, and seeing I know where your thoughts were in this (u_u)

Lovey..

I liked it a lot. I would have given up as well. Some people just can't be changed. The poem was very good, shows emotion nicely and I agree with how you felt. You try and try but they give up in the end and get what I suppose they deserve. Very nice, my friend.

That was a very dark poem. It sounds like a poem about someone who committed suicide. I liked it and look forward to reading more of your poems.

man you becoming emo or something!. Nice poem man it was pretty kool.

Wow another awesome poem big bro!!! I really liked it alot.The darkness,hatred and sadness in this poem with sooo awesome!!! Once again awesome job big bro!!!

thanks i am glad you liked it i will try another soon but
right now i am trying a story i will post soon