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    That was awesome and cool and so dark and emoish
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    Hey Bro!

    Awesome poem, this one really caught my attention! I like the use of wording in this poem and my favorite line is:

    No happy ending for you my friend
    as the flames eat you eternaly,i say
    good bye to you knowing i won't
    do the same over silly love games.

    Outstanding Job Bro

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