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    I Want to Let Go!

    The moment she wakes up will i be there or will i
    run , i am sick of this whole thing in my life , my trust
    in her is always tested , the way she thinks is always
    best maybe its just fates test .


    I always seem to be alone , my feelings thrown away
    again , theres no way to turn back time to return to the
    place of the crime , things always seem to slip away when
    i need something real to hold , if only there was time to reflect
    on what i have done.

    I am also close to hate but my feelings they are late , nothing
    at this point will bring back the love that i had when she laughed,
    those memories are gone faded to black and white there cold , there
    is nothing i can do to hold what i feel for her.

    With all these feelings i hold inside can love truly conquer all?
    i have my doubts with things so far nothing will ever be the same
    i just wish deep inside that all this crap would go away , because
    the life i wish i had is put on hold for something that is dead...
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: I Want to Let Go!

    That's a really awesome poem... how did you think of it???????

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    Re: I Want to Let Go!

    i let my emotions become words i sent a pm to you explaining it better
    though thanks
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: I Want to Let Go!

    Your poem is amazing. I hate to say i know what that feels was like but there are someday i really didn't know why i was with my girlfriend but in the end i didn't regrat know her.
    You are a great poet.

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    Re: I Want to Let Go!

    thanks im glad you liked it so much i wil try and post more but
    poems are are to force they come to me as i feel certain ways
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: I Want to Let Go!

    Sounds like the chick in the poem put you through the ringer. Well, at least you have someone to agonize over like that.
    *Shrug* Love is for the real masochists, I suppose.

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    Re: I Want to Let Go!

    Quote Originally Posted by TaurusDemon23 View Post
    Sounds like the chick in the poem put you through the ringer. Well, at least you have someone to agonize over like that.
    *Shrug* Love is for the real masochists, I suppose.
    lol true but you have to love how we try anyway
    no pain gain lol
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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