''I want to see u awake''

(The (2) is the choir)

Evry time when i awake
i start to think if ur out bed
walking out to say
evrything is alright
''just dont worry about me'' (2)
eternal sleep
doesnt leave
a sound
or sign
of life between u and me

i just want to see
if ur going to be on ur feet
walking just directly to me
''saying what a relive
now there are no worries'' (back to (2) )

I have no soul
im so alone
im page being torn
evry minute
second
i get worst cuz im not hearing ur voice (back to (2) )

i got no time
i got no life
without feeling ur besides me
holding my hand
watching evry move from my back
i cant stand
what my life has being
there no place no place
for me to be ( back to (2) )

I cant sleep
i cannot be seen
by people that have a there perfect being
my life being taken
cut
like a string
i cannot take my life anymore so ill just
kill my self
i dont have nothing to live for
only for seen u awake

dang missed up ending to end it all I love it man it's a cool poem. I need to hang that up on my wall.

few grammatical errors, but aside from that, I loved it.. was heart-felt and flowed fairly nicely.. Post more ^.^

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Originally Posted by kenchi18

dang missed up ending to end it all I love it man it's a cool poem. I need to hang that up on my wall.

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thanx for ur support dudes..

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Originally Posted by -=Broken^Halo=-

few grammatical errors, but aside from that, I loved it.. was heart-felt and flowed fairly nicely.. Post more ^.^

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well ima spanish so can make a lot fo errors amigo.:thumb:

muey bein!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Originally Posted by princesslady

muey bein!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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gracias a lot amigo ( muy bien)

me no importa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
da nanda