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    ''I want to see u awake''

    (The (2) is the choir)

    Evry time when i awake
    i start to think if ur out bed
    walking out to say
    evrything is alright
    ''just dont worry about me'' (2)
    eternal sleep
    doesnt leave
    a sound
    or sign
    of life between u and me

    i just want to see
    if ur going to be on ur feet
    walking just directly to me
    ''saying what a relive
    now there are no worries'' (back to (2) )

    I have no soul
    im so alone
    im page being torn
    evry minute
    second
    i get worst cuz im not hearing ur voice (back to (2) )

    i got no time
    i got no life
    without feeling ur besides me
    holding my hand
    watching evry move from my back
    i cant stand
    what my life has being
    there no place no place
    for me to be ( back to (2) )

    I cant sleep
    i cannot be seen
    by people that have a there perfect being
    my life being taken
    cut
    like a string
    i cannot take my life anymore so ill just
    kill my self
    i dont have nothing to live for
    only for seen u awake
    Last edited by Baal; Aug 19, 2006 at 12:30 PM.



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    Re: ''I want to see u awake''

    dang missed up ending to end it all I love it man it's a cool poem. I need to hang that up on my wall.
    Your life means nothing to me.

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    Re: ''I want to see u awake''

    few grammatical errors, but aside from that, I loved it.. was heart-felt and flowed fairly nicely.. Post more ^.^
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    Re: ''I want to see u awake''

    Quote Originally Posted by kenchi18 View Post
    dang missed up ending to end it all I love it man it's a cool poem. I need to hang that up on my wall.
    thanx for ur support dudes..



    perdoname michelle!

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    Re: ''I want to see u awake''

    Quote Originally Posted by -=Broken^Halo=- View Post
    few grammatical errors, but aside from that, I loved it.. was heart-felt and flowed fairly nicely.. Post more ^.^
    well ima spanish so can make a lot fo errors amigo.



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    Re: ''I want to see u awake''

    muey bein!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    Re: ''I want to see u awake''

    Quote Originally Posted by princesslady View Post
    muey bein!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    gracias a lot amigo ( muy bien)



    perdoname michelle!

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    Re: ''I want to see u awake''

    me no importa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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