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    i want you back


    When you kissed me all my pain leaves

    The warmth of your breath agent me

    The touch you give isn’t like any other...

    There’s something special about you...

    There were some really bad times...

    But I don’t care I still love you!

    And the fist time I said them words came from the heart and the ones I tell
    you now also

    Come from deep in my heart...

    If we could forget it all if we could turn back time...

    I wouldn’t let you out leave my side

    I still love you and if you still love me we could give it another shot...

    What do you say??

    i need you back...your all i think of your all i belive in right now ... i still love you

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    Re: i want you back

    well hello my friend.
    Ok great poem though there are mistakes that I had to fill in, in my mind.
    great poem anyway and I really do like it.
    so go and get the world, because I know you can.

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    Awwwww... That is sooooo romantic^^ I love it.... It was wonderful, even if there are some misspellings but its great!! I love it^^ Keep up the great work!!!!
    Last edited by Jamie5192; Aug 28, 2007 at 12:19 PM. Reason: change color.. to hard to read

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    Re: i want you back

    Wow! This has to be one of the most heart-felt poems I've ever read!

    You got yourself some skills! Grammatical errors aside, good job! ^_^


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    aww thank you yeah i really feel this one and i hope he gets to read it too ^^

    and thank you all for the comments ^^ much thanked ^^

    yeah.. ermm im a bad speller... and msw dont help >< lol anyways thank you all

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