Based on real events, that happened between July 3rd and July 10th
Poem dedicated for Tanja, my love.
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I waited that week for long time --
I dropped everything for that week.
For that one week I could spend with you --
but I could never knew what would happen --
before our week together.
You were going through the hardest time --
the hardest time of your life --
and I couldn't be there for you --
to give you strenght and power to fight.
I felt so weak -- all I could do was just watch.
Watch when you shed tears,
cos' of this life --
cos' of me --
I tried everything I could --
so I could get to you, but for nothing.
No matter how much I tried it wasn't enough --
enough to get to you.
And when you shed tears, I had best time --
best time of my life -- or I would have had --
Cos' you couldn't be here, with me --
I could just cry, nothing else --
And just before I fall to sleep --
I'm sending present to you -- a kiss
a kiss for my angel --
a kiss for my love.
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[Post script]
I'll come for you and fight with you all the way towards end.
First I would like to apologize what I did...
I'm sorry, I that I couldn't be there for you when you needed me.
I'm sorry for pain, sorry for those hours you spend shedding tears,
sorry for everything.
Last edited by NightFox; Jul 19, 2006 at 08:20 AM.
Love hurts...trust me I know, I really do...
This poem is so sweet! And sad too..
I liked this part-
It gives the poem a sort of melancholy twist...You were going through the hardest time --
the hardest time of your life --
and I couldn't be there for you --
to give you strenght and power to fight.
TY Sasurai for the lovely sig!*
Thanks for comment, in this poem I was trying achieve as sad mood as possible...
Love hurts...trust me I know, I really do...
I think this part is confusing...
It sounds like you are happy she cried? Doesn't make sense to my ignorant self.And when you shed tears, I had best time --
best time of my life -- or I would have had --
Cos' you couldn't be here, with me --
I could just cry, nothing else --
o~Piggy-san~o
It's referance to real life when I recieved information from college that I got in...
but in the same time she was having really tough period.
Meaning: She cried, I was happy...but lost my happiness cos' I heard what was happening
and also she couldn't be here with me to celebrate.
Love hurts...trust me I know, I really do...
wow...a very emotional piece Night ^_^
i didnt get that part T_T "i could never knew what would happen before your week" ????I waited that week for long time --
I dropped everything for that week.
For that one week I could spend with you --
but I could never knew what would happen --
before your week
still, it's a good poem.
and ur style of using " ----" is sorta kewl
Pain lets you know you are alive..........And it is a fine teacher....Learn what you may....
NoT tHe SiGgY yOu R lOOkInG 4
Move Along.
taurus is actually correct for once, i enjoyed your poem very much i hope you continue to write more
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