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![]() ![]() Credits: 2,277 | I weak, so frail... Based on real events, that happened between July 3rd and July 10th Poem dedicated for Tanja, my love. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- I waited that week for long time -- I dropped everything for that week. For that one week I could spend with you -- but I could never knew what would happen -- before our week together. You were going through the hardest time -- the hardest time of your life -- and I couldn't be there for you -- to give you strenght and power to fight. I felt so weak -- all I could do was just watch. Watch when you shed tears, cos' of this life -- cos' of me -- I tried everything I could -- so I could get to you, but for nothing. No matter how much I tried it wasn't enough -- enough to get to you. And when you shed tears, I had best time -- best time of my life -- or I would have had -- Cos' you couldn't be here, with me -- I could just cry, nothing else -- And just before I fall to sleep -- I'm sending present to you -- a kiss a kiss for my angel -- a kiss for my love. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- [Post script] I'll come for you and fight with you all the way towards end. First I would like to apologize what I did... I'm sorry, I that I couldn't be there for you when you needed me. I'm sorry for pain, sorry for those hours you spend shedding tears, sorry for everything.
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![]() ![]() Credits: 4,237 | Re: I weak, so frail... This poem is so sweet! And sad too.. I liked this part- Quote:
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![]() ![]() Credits: 2,277 | Re: I weak, so frail... Thanks for comment, in this poem I was trying achieve as sad mood as possible...
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![]() ![]() Credits: 171 | Re: I weak, so frail... I think this part is confusing... Quote:
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![]() ![]() Credits: 2,277 | Re: I weak, so frail... It's referance to real life when I recieved information from college that I got in... but in the same time she was having really tough period. Meaning: She cried, I was happy...but lost my happiness cos' I heard what was happening and also she couldn't be here with me to celebrate.
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![]() ![]() Credits: 2,051 | Re: I weak, so frail... wow...a very emotional piece Night ^_^ Quote:
still, it's a good poem. and ur style of using " ----" is sorta kewl ![]()
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![]() ![]() Credits: 2,552 | Re: I weak, so frail... Pain lets you know you are alive..........And it is a fine teacher....Learn what you may.... |
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![]() ![]() Credits: 865 | Re: I weak, so frail... taurus is actually correct for once, i enjoyed your poem very much i hope you continue to write more
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![]() ![]() Credits: 2,277 | Re: I weak, so frail... Quote:
lol, I made stupid typo in that part, "your" should have been "our". And seecond typo right after cos' I read what I typed...and din't think at all Fixed it...thanks for spotting it
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![]() ![]() Credits: 3,212 | Re: I weak, so frail... i like how you described how you felt about her and how you wanted to be there for her but couldnt very real life stuff here awesome poem |
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