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    I will

    I will be there to hold you tight
    I will be there to cover you from the rain
    I will be there to kiss your cheek
    I will be there to heal all the pain

    I will be there to cry on
    I will be there when you're alone
    I will be there to wipe the tears
    I will be there on the other side of the phone

    I will be there to hold your hand
    I will be there always
    I will be there no matter what
    But I have this one thing to say

    Will you?

    Writer's Notes: Eh, it feels...unfinished...Anyways, another softy poem. I have sort of a writer's block right now so I didn't expect this to be that good. But I just had to write something. Thanks for reading.

    They say, "I will die for my country." I never hear them say, "I will kill for my country."

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    Re: I will

    Very touching one I love read it …
    You are such as a great person to be ready
    to this person who wrote too ..And you say it wasn't finished but I think it finish.
    Really Great work …^^

    Foolish beating

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    Re: I will

    You repeated "I will" very much,but,it's okay,it was covered by strong words and feelings ^.^
    Well in my opinion it was good,You're willing to do things for a(lover,maybe?) person,are you expecting that love to be returned?
    Well,it was good^^

    Become a wind, unfathomable distress. I'll hold back your loneliness.

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    Re: I will

    Thank you both. There's a personal story behind this, but I'll just keep that to myself. =) But I'll just tell one thing, it's not decreasing. Nor am I waiting for something, it's almost just a poem I just plainly wrote.
    Last edited by Chaos105; Aug 07, 2007 at 05:35 PM.

    They say, "I will die for my country." I never hear them say, "I will kill for my country."

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