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    I Will Love You

    I will love you forever and ever
    I always hope that we'll be together
    Avoiding me is what you do
    but you have to believe that i love you
    love is what i will bring
    Hoping this will be a lifetime thing
    But of course not everything can last
    All of this will fade into the past
    I know for a fact that someday
    In my mind you'll drift away
    But just remember from the start
    You'll always have a place in my heart
    I"ll always keep my eye on everything you do
    Just because i do really love you!
    You are my everything
    You were my light
    That had the strength to guide me through
    lonely nights,
    You were the stars
    That helped our love to come this far
    You were the shadow by my side
    That gave my happiness and pride
    You were the ocean sand
    To tell me you'd always be there
    To lend a hand
    You were the moon
    That would tell me my fears would be
    over come soon
    You were the rain
    To be there and ease the pain
    You are to me my everything
    and the joy and happiness that you'd bring
    I love you - of course i do
    but what i am wondering is.....
    What am i to you?

    Foolish beating

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    Re: I Will Love You

    simple, yet elegant<-spelling?
    I like it, I hope to see more k? ^^
    "act the way you want to be and soon you'll be the way you act"

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    Re: I Will Love You

    Quote Originally Posted by xxoxx View Post
    I will love you forever and ever
    I always hope that we'll be together
    Avoiding me is what you do
    but you have to believe that i love you
    love is what i will bring
    Hoping this will be a lifetime thing
    But of course not everything can last
    All of this will fade into the past
    I know for a fact that someday
    In my mind you'll drift away
    But just remember from the start
    You'll always have a place in my heart
    I"ll always keep my eye on everything you do
    Just because i do really love you!
    You are my everything
    You were my light
    That had the strength to guide me through
    lonely nights,
    You were the stars
    That helped our love to come this far
    You were the shadow by my side
    That gave my happiness and pride
    You were the ocean sand
    To tell me you'd always be there
    To lend a hand
    You were the moon
    That would tell me my fears would be
    over come soon
    You were the rain
    To be there and ease the pain
    You are to me my everything
    and the joy and happiness that you'd bring
    I love you - of course i do
    but what i am wondering is.....
    What am i to you?
    its so awesome just like you are and i am glade we are firend

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    Re: I Will Love You

    really Thanks alot for the sweet commenet
    both of you and aIam glad to be friend with you jveli3...
    *iwill love you * it's for someone hope he read it ...

    Foolish beating

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    Re: I Will Love You

    I thought this was really sweet and well written. And when I got to the end I found it fantastic. The way you ended wrapped it all up in a neat litle package and made it perfect. I hope to see more from ya' soon

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    Re: I Will Love You

    Hey XXOXX verry good poem I like it alot and it held such a high cuantity of emotions that I coul dnot belive it was just writen. you shown through and now you wanna know the other halfs oppinion great job on it keep it up. I cant wait to see more from you.
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    This is really good.^^ Its filled with such strong love and its very sweet. I like how you compared this person to the stars and ocean. I would give this poem a 10/10.

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    Re: I Will Love You

    Well Thanks bratling & angelflow and Ichigo_06 I am glad that you like It ..
    angel *strong love * mabye ..
    Thanks alll for your feedbacks ..^^

    Foolish beating

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