Thread: i wish

What is this love break week~ >_< Gosh... I have to say never had this problem, but lovey, and very intune poem..

Watch out fir those writting errors~~

thanks alot mr.k ^_^ and i will Watch out fir those writting errors lol

If you don't show my comments some consideration and put them to us, I won't comment. []

Come on now, put in more time into your poems... They carry good meaning, but work with them, and try to incorporate some charm into them. It just seems like you haven't spent a lot of time on this one... I would also advice you to read the poems written by other members here, they will help better your poetic skills.

ok thanks kedar and i will cos any thing you say gose k ^_^