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    i wish

    sometimes i wish
    he would look at me
    and say i love you
    instead of walking past thinking
    what how the hell is she
    even tho hes known me from life begain
    but he knows me when he needs something
    but i wish he just knew the real me

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    Re: i wish

    What is this love break week~ >_< Gosh... I have to say never had this problem, but lovey, and very intune poem..

    Watch out fir those writting errors~~
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    thanks alot mr.k ^_^ and i will Watch out fir those writting errors lol

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    Re: i wish

    If you don't show my comments some consideration and put them to us, I won't comment. []

    Come on now, put in more time into your poems... They carry good meaning, but work with them, and try to incorporate some charm into them. It just seems like you haven't spent a lot of time on this one... I would also advice you to read the poems written by other members here, they will help better your poetic skills.

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    Re: i wish

    ok thanks kedar and i will cos any thing you say gose k ^_^

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