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    I Wonder

    As I wait as the days go by
    I wonder if he remembers me
    The lonlyness I feel
    I wonder if he feels it too
    Before he left he said
    "I'll always remember you."
    But I wonder how he will
    As a friend or as more?
    I havn't heard from him
    Since that day he left
    So now I wonder if loving him
    Was even for the best.....
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    So it's a little eiser to write them, K?
    Just like this one.

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    Re: I Wonder

    A nice poem Freya, short but serious... A nice work...

    I enjoyed reading this, because I could find myslef, my thoughts and feelings in it... nice work with that also.

    A really good work Freya! ^^ Also I'm glad to see you are active at least in the Poem section ^^

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: I Wonder

    Oh, why thank you so much! I absolutely LOVE writing poetry!

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    Re: I Wonder

    It was a very nice poem I look forward to seeing more of your works. I really enjoyed it.

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    Re: I Wonder

    Great poem! This poem kinda reminds me a bit but I still like it so I hope to see more!
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    Re: I Wonder

    Very well writen! I love all of your poems my friend! So sad and full of emotion....you are turning out to be a good aprentice! I am very proud!



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    Re: I Wonder

    good job freya i like it cuz its sad and mixed emotions keep it up♥da princess
    Yeah, Bye.

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