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    I Won't Give Up

    You may not believe
    That my motives are pure

    But I will help you
    And thats for sure

    I know that you're hurt
    I truly do understand

    But everyone needs help
    Each woman and man

    Please let me in
    So you won't be alone

    Let others in
    They'll make you strong

    Don't keep hurting her
    She doesn't deserve it

    She deserves your love
    Completely, wholeheartedly

    Be together with her and make her happy
    Because be angry won't help anyone

    You may think this is random
    But you need to hear it

    Open your eyes to the world around you
    And see how beautiful it truly is
    Without the hatred you're filling it with

    But even if you won't do it on your own
    I won't give up

    I will help you
    No matter what


    Our love will go on until the end of time. I will always be yours and you will be mine.

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    Re: I Won't Give Up

    what a cute poem.it rhymed really well! this poem gives off a special feeling,and a great one at that. keep it up!
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    Re: I Won't Give Up

    that's was a fabuolas and very emolotion ....and the feeling i like it ...
    don't give up and keep up....i love it....very nice poem ....

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    Re: I Won't Give Up

    Oh my god... this is so... nice of you...
    I admire the fact that you can just sit down and write a poem about something- I need inspiration so I never seem to be able to come up with the right words in the right time...
    A wonderful poem too... Don't understand how you do this...

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