what a cute poem.it rhymed really well! this poem gives off a special feeling,and a great one at that. keep it up!
You may not believe
That my motives are pure
But I will help you
And thats for sure
I know that you're hurt
I truly do understand
But everyone needs help
Each woman and man
Please let me in
So you won't be alone
Let others in
They'll make you strong
Don't keep hurting her
She doesn't deserve it
She deserves your love
Completely, wholeheartedly
Be together with her and make her happy
Because be angry won't help anyone
You may think this is random
But you need to hear it
Open your eyes to the world around you
And see how beautiful it truly is
Without the hatred you're filling it with
But even if you won't do it on your own
I won't give up
I will help you
No matter what
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Our love will go on until the end of time. I will always be yours and you will be mine.
what a cute poem.it rhymed really well! this poem gives off a special feeling,and a great one at that. keep it up!
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that's was a fabuolas and very emolotion ....and the feeling i like it ...
don't give up and keep up....i love it....very nice poem ....
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Oh my god... this is so... nice of you...
I admire the fact that you can just sit down and write a poem about something- I need inspiration so I never seem to be able to come up with the right words in the right time...
A wonderful poem too... Don't understand how you do this...
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