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    Re: Icharus of Time

    Quote Originally Posted by RayMe View Post
    Hah.. a very well done job by tenchu san.. well explain a bit to me about the pattern?
    Oh, it goes 10 syllables, 8 syllabes, 5 syllables and then it reverses to 5, 8, 10.

    Thanks for the criticism.

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    Re: Icharus of Time

    This is the first poem I have read in months. I love it though it kinda gave me chills down my spine. One thing to fix: (not really wanting to point it out in the thread.)

    New wings, a gift from the car speeing by.

    Speeding.

    Please don't take offense to it. You did an awesome job with this poem though!
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    Re: Icharus of Time

    Quote Originally Posted by Ky-lyrra View Post
    This is the first poem I have read in months. I love it though it kinda gave me chills down my spine. One thing to fix: (not really wanting to point it out in the thread.)

    New wings, a gift from the car speeing by.

    Speeding.

    Please don't take offense to it. You did an awesome job with this poem though!

    No, thanks. I was writing this while getting a lecture from someone, so I was only half paying attention. Haha, thanks for catching it.

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