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    Well here i am writing silly things again >.<

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    Ideas

    I sat down staring at my hand
    It is holding a pen and I wondered...
    Why won't it budge and
    Why the paper was still blank?

    Swing it like a sword!
    But no…it stays still as the crickets sing...
    It is not going to my accord
    I sighed and said "This is frustrating"

    My fingers! Tap the keyboard!
    Or I will snap you all off!
    No!! Don't go abroad!
    Crap!

    I yelled loudly in my heart
    That it echoes through the deep dark void
    Now I cursed every part of me…
    Oh god…

    The gears in my mind must have clogged
    Maybe they all have rusted?
    There are ideas flying around to be captured
    I hoped I would have found one instead.

    Take flight kite!
    So that I could write!
    Go higher to the space where they roam!
    Catch a spark so I can make a poem!

    AND A SPARK CAME! FINALLY!
    Through the murky clouds it slither while sparking
    What an ecstasy!
    I happily wrote this poem as I reel it down like fishing

    How silly of me... All I need was patience and imagination!

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    So... feel free to comment dear AO community ^^ I could use some advise too and lastly.. Enjoy

    (Been a long time since i last write >.< sheesh im getting rusty..)

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    Re: Ideas

    Well it's good to see you back in the poem forum Ray even if you might be a little rusty, Ray still sparks a Ray-spark.... Sorry anyway really good poem and i hope to see some more poems from you Ray, now that it's be sometime since your last poem, even if it might be silly ^^

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    Re: Ideas

    I knew it!! It is silly >.< Hmm im going to write again ^^ don't worry.. i haven't got a valentine's present for my dearest...so i think a poem would be nice Thanks for your support

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    Re: Ideas

    At least someone is trying to write some poetry. As I have pretty much given up. Not on writing. But on writing anything that I can take seriously.

    Good poem though... but the ending seemed abrupt.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Quote Originally Posted by RayMe View Post
    I knew it!! It is silly >.< Hmm im going to write again ^^ don't worry.. i haven't got a valentine's present for my dearest...so i think a poem would be nice Thanks for your support
    You're welcome Ray ^^ should it there be another time

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    t least someone is trying to write some poetry. As I have pretty much given up. Not on writing. But on writing anything that I can take seriously.

    Good poem though... but the ending seemed abrupt
    Hmmm the ending... already 2 person said the same thing >.< the flow got distrupted on the ending it seems.. >.<

    Does it start from the stanza about getting an idea.. or the terrible ending?

    I see.. Your work was always great...I hope you won't give up... Little people writing poetry nowadays here....i hope we can make it live like it was before...you know...I am sad to see AO like this.. my first "spark" was from this site after all... I wrote my very first poem in someone's poem thread >.< well what do you expect on a noob

    You're welcome Ray ^^ should it there be another time
    There will! ^^ You can't read the poem after this though.. its going especially for my cutie..

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    Re: Ideas

    That's fair enough there should allways be room for that sorta things XD lol

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    Re: Ideas

    i liked that poem.it was really goodwhen i try to write poems it turns
    out like crap

    ..."dont pretend to know me ... when i dont even know myself..."

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