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    Idol Threats?

    You think you can threaten me with you
    insignificant words ,trying to make me
    tremble with words of hate and bitterness,
    thinking you will always say the right thing.

    Your words there nothing but piss in the wind
    your hatred for me is nothing but a small part
    of what your true self hides , everything you
    think and say about me is just your pathetic
    way of making your self seem better than me.

    Today i am here to say that the words
    you use .the anger you show ,all of it
    is just opening a door to a dark side that
    has been dormant for a long time a beast
    that yurns for chaos and despair.

    It has been kept from the world for a very
    long time then recently i had a reason
    to put a lock on its door ,but with what you have said
    and your constant anger and ignorance this beast will
    break its bondage .

    Tears, hate, anger, blackness, a soulless beast that
    craves the darkness everything that i thrived on
    so long ago its all to complex for your feeble mind
    but i can hold for the sake of the one i love
    and promised because i refuse the darkness.

    Asking me to bagful is something you should telling yourself
    because no matter how you think your life is bad it just scratches
    the surface of what i know is hell and torment and the darkness you
    speak of is nothing more than dark room with a night light
    compared to what i have seen and known.

    A wise man once said to know your own fears and live with them
    is nothing compared t the true horror's that hide behind the starry
    nights that twinkle in the heavens, this can be said about a lot
    of things but for me that only describes only half of what makes
    me scared of my self.

    So i make this my one and only warning tread not on a
    beast that hasn't fed on anger or hatred in years for it will
    devour you and for your sake you better hope it devours you fast.

    This poem describes what anger and fear can drive a person
    who has nothing to loose to say and maybe do if he is pushed
    it has nothing to do with me and it isn't a thread or a flame
    its pretty much what happen when someone tries to be nice
    and that kindness is thrown back in there face with a laugh.
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    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Idol Threats?

    Nice and angry. I know those well. Those are the best ones sometimes. It's nice how you used symbolism with your anger and stuff, that was cool. Keep this stuff up, I enjoy reading it.
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    Re: Idol Threats?

    That was a very angry and thoughtful poem. It makes alot of sense. Keep up the good work.
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    Re: Idol Threats?

    Did you mean "Idle Threats"?

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    Wow!!!! That was sooooo awesome big bro!!! I just loved the anger that was in this.Awesome job as always big bro.Keep up the awesome work.
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    Re: Idol Threats?

    I love how there is so much information in the poem. However, the way the poem is written isnt exactly my type of tea. The subject of the poem? Fairly interesting, but there are a few spelling errors.
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