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    If I could be.

    If I could be a teardrop from your eye.
    I'd kiss your cheeks, as I slid by.
    Soaked in your pillow I would hide.
    Forever resting by your side.

    If I could be the tips of your shoe laces.
    I'd guide you away from ugly faces.
    Making sure you never sway.
    At your feet, everyday.

    If I could be your pocket lint.
    You would never need a cent.
    I'd accumulate till I was good and healthy.
    With heavy pockets, you'll feel wealthy.

    If I could be a snowflake on your shirt.
    Id try to melt and soothe the hurt.
    For I would land apon your heart.
    Absorb me, and we'll never part.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: If I could be.

    Very sweet poem. I bet alot of people would've used it yesturday to give to their sweethearts. I look forward to reading more.
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    Re: If I could be.

    A nice peaceful poem. I like poems like that. Especially yours because you put a lot of emotion into it. Good Job.

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    Re: If I could be.

    Great poem, I thought it was kinda funny when you said 'If I could be the tips of your shoe laces. I'd guide you away from ugly faces.'

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    Re: If I could be.

    Aww. The first two verses made me smile.
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    Re: If I could be.

    This is a really nice poem, it made me smile.
    way to go and I can't wait to read more.
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