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    if i was without you

    this is how I would feel if I lost or never meet someone so loving and dear to me I would miss him so...
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    if I was never with you....
    an empty place would be missing in my heart
    to never be filled feeling so blue
    what I do isn't smart....

    with out you in my life there is no other,
    if we have never meet I would have regret not meeting you,
    I just know that where meet for eachother
    all these feelings battle into one, what should I do?

    looks out to the stars above wishing for the one to fine me,
    sitting here just thinking who you are
    I wish I just could of been there to see,
    so I look near and far

    just so I can find you again...
    this empty feeling without you in my life
    the pain would never end I just can't stand,
    I just want this pain to end...

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    Re: if i was without you

    Great poem, it was touching, does it relate to your life at all?
    Ready for the zombies now, are you?

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    Re: if i was without you

    Quote Originally Posted by dracoff2007 View Post
    Great poem, it was touching, does it relate to your life at all?
    yeah, in away i put myself and the guy i'm with in most of my poems. This one is just about if i was without him.

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    Re: if i was without you

    Cool, I feel that way about my girlfriend, and she feels the same way
    Ready for the zombies now, are you?

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    Re: if i was without you

    Quote Originally Posted by dracoff2007 View Post
    Cool, I feel that way about my girlfriend, and she feels the same way
    awww thats sooo cute! yea thats good feeling being in love and thats good you two feelthe same way for one and nother

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    Yeah, and we've been dating for almost 3 months
    Ready for the zombies now, are you?

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    Re: if i was without you

    Quote Originally Posted by dracoff2007 View Post
    Yeah, and we've been dating for almost 3 months
    aww thats nice. me and my fiance has been together 4 a yr now. and engaged for 8 months.

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    Re: if i was without you

    I really loved it!
    dracoff is right..
    When I create poems, I always base it in my life and not just my life but also my classmates friends etc..
    I just love the way you put words in each stanzas
    I loved her so much.... i would dare to risk my own life only to save her from dying....
    I loved my GF...
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