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Reply With QuoteGreat poem, it was touching, does it relate to your life at all?
this is how I would feel if I lost or never meet someone so loving and dear to me I would miss him so...
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if I was never with you....
an empty place would be missing in my heart
to never be filled feeling so blue
what I do isn't smart....
with out you in my life there is no other,
if we have never meet I would have regret not meeting you,
I just know that where meet for eachother
all these feelings battle into one, what should I do?
looks out to the stars above wishing for the one to fine me,
sitting here just thinking who you are
I wish I just could of been there to see,
so I look near and far
just so I can find you again...
this empty feeling without you in my life
the pain would never end I just can't stand,
I just want this pain to end...
Great poem, it was touching, does it relate to your life at all?
Ready for the zombies now, are you?
yeah, in away i put myself and the guy i'm with in most of my poems. This one is just about if i was without him.Originally Posted by dracoff2007
Cool, I feel that way about my girlfriend, and she feels the same way
awww thats sooo cute!
yea thats good feeling being in love and thats good you two feelthe same way for one and nother
Re: if i was without you Yeah, and we've been dating for almost 3 months
aww thats nice. me and my fiance has been together 4 a yr now. and engaged for 8 months.Yeah, and we've been dating for almost 3 months
I really loved it!
dracoff is right..
When I create poems, I always base it in my life and not just my life but also my classmates friends etc..
I just love the way you put words in each stanzas
I loved her so much.... i would dare to risk my own life only to save her from dying....
I loved my GF...
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