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    Re: if i was without you

    Quote Originally Posted by receiverofhell View Post
    I really loved it!
    dracoff is right..
    When I create poems, I always base it in my life and not just my life but also my classmates friends etc..
    I just love the way you put words in each stanzas
    aww thank you so much! yeah thats what i do in most of my poems, but i like writing about love more then anything ealse

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    Re: if i was without you

    I think that poems should be based on something that you know and like, but there are people who just write about something that they don't know and they mess stuff up
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    Re: if i was without you

    aww thank you so much! yeah thats what i do in most of my poems, but i like writing about love more then anything ealse
    I always do that one too!
    I also writes my poems based on my daily life, crushes, relationship with my girlfriend ansd stuffs like that
    I loved her so much.... i would dare to risk my own life only to save her from dying....
    I loved my GF...
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    Re: if i was without you

    The ones I write are based on things that are happening all around us
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    The ones I write are based on things that are happening all around us
    That's one of the typical types, I used to read...
    I really loved to read it
    I loved her so much.... i would dare to risk my own life only to save her from dying....
    I loved my GF...
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    Re: if i was without you

    thats a really nice poem quite sad emotions around it yes? but i can tell how u feel from being away from a loved one but id feel the same if i never met my bf

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    Re: if i was without you

    thats a really nice poem quite sad emotions around it yes? but i can tell how u feel from being away from a loved one but id feel the same if i never met my bf
    OH! equinn is right!
    I really felt the same way! bring away form my gf and I really have many doubts and we are in long distance relationship so I can tell myself that I felt the very smae emotion you felt,..
    I loved her so much.... i would dare to risk my own life only to save her from dying....
    I loved my GF...
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    Re: if i was without you

    Quote Originally Posted by equinn View Post
    thats a really nice poem quite sad emotions around it yes? but i can tell how u feel from being away from a loved one but id feel the same if i never met my bf
    thank you. yeah i put all emotions into this one him and i live 2 to 3 hrs away from eachother but we always make things work and it is so were engaged to eachother and it so nice being with him.

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