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    If Only

    If only
    You didn't love me
    If only
    I loved you back
    If only
    I didn't make you cry
    If only
    You didn't run away and die
    If only
    I didn't cry at your grave
    If only
    I didn't feel guilt
    All of it could have
    Been avoided
    If I only
    Loved you
    Like you wanted me too.....
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    hahaha, unfortunatly a true poem.....
    *sigh* only a year ago this happened
    but it still feels like it happened
    just yesterday.............
    Last edited by Akura13; Jul 12, 2007 at 06:03 PM. Reason: Had to add something sry!



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    Re: If Only

    wow that poem was real deep i liked it, good job. So thats true is it? thats sad. Im sorry.
    I love Jurmaru,and hes dead, so what does that make me?

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    Re: If Only

    Very good poem.Very sad tho.But its a very great poem.

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    Re: If Only

    It's a very good poem indeed.The mood of it is deep and it's kind of depressing in a way.Sorry for your loss,though it's a year late.

    Become a wind, unfathomable distress. I'll hold back your loneliness.

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    Re: If Only

    Great poem AKURA!!!!!! I loved it so much!!!!!! So deep really thats what made me get so excited for some reason!!!!! I hope to see more!!!!!!!!!!
    「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」

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    *bows* thank you all very much I appreciate all the complaments thank you again!



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    Re: If Only

    It's really good Poem I love It ...
    How sad This Poem ..*You still remember*..

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